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Hello! It appears you have sent this into my feedback group! Here is your review.

Lineart: 8/10. Very good! It appears you have made an attempt with slightly colored lineart with this piece, which makes the picture look more interesting and colorful. I suggest trying to expand on this concept by using more lines that match the color it surrounds. For example, using brown to outline her blonde hair.

Color/shading: 5/10. Clean, and you can tell what the picture is. However, as with most of your pieces, the lack of of shading takes away from the piece and makes it look boring and lacking depth. I suggest working on this.

Anatomy: 6/10. With pixel art, you can get away with most anatomical errors. However, theyare far too obvious here. The eyes are extremely close together, leaving wide spaces at the sides of the face. I suggest moving them slightly further apart. Typically, you want enough room in between them to fit another eye. The chin is also awkward-looking, because it's too pointy and not rounded like it should be. Near the sides of the face, try to make them rounder so that they look like they curve up properly into the head.

Composition and visual attraction: 7/10. Fair in terms of the isolated image itself. I suggest cropping the huge white background around it because it makes the picture empty aside from the actual icon.

Subject matter and originality: 8/10. There's not much to it, and since not a lot is expected, that is fine. The girl looks slightly plain—maybe a bow in her hair would help!

Final rating: 6.8/10. It's very good, but you still have a long way to go. Remember, using references of pixel art from others will help a lot so you can see how more experienced artists get it done! I wish the best :)