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I'd like to start by saying that this looks FANTASTIC!
THINGS YOU DID WELL:
You did a fantastic job laying down the colours thickly!
The way you drew her lips was really beautiful, the way they curve as they meet one another was absolutely spot on!
I also really love the small curved line under her lip, it really accentuates how full and plump her lower lip is.
STEPS TO IMPROVE:
When colouring skin, I noticed that you mostly colour specific areas by coloring back and forth in a bunch of straight lines. In order to keep the colouring looking more smooth and natural, try colouring in small, gentle circles around the entire surface you intend to colour. If it doesn't come out dark enough just go over it again.
When colouring hair it is best to either use the circle method described above or to follow each strand along it’s entire length as breaking the line makes it look like their hair is broken.
The only other things I can think to work on in this one is to make sure facial features are symmetrical and to work on your anatomy a bit.
GREAT JOB! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO IMPROVE!